Tuesday, August 31, 2010

Community model revised

Sean and I sat down together and did a facelift to our original map. I feel it much more clear, and focused more on an online community.

1 comment:

Marty Maxwell Lane said...

Hi Johnna (and Sean)

Your diagram is in much better shape in regard to clarity. I would work a bit more on the relationship of the typography on the perimeter to the typography in the structure. Should color be employed in the titles (perimeter) to show connection? Consider type size and uppercase vs. lowercase, be decisive about shifts. Are there other ways to connect the structure with the outer information?

Good progress.